I knew I should have ran

I knew I should have ran

A Poem by Kimberly Smith

 

 Knew I should run
 
When the grass seemed higher than the sun
In a grasses meadow, knees filled with pain
Wind triples up my ragged sundress as I wait for you in the planes.
Birds fly behind me in the mid muggy hot weather, the sun seems to set
slower then you ever.


As my thoughts race across the blank expression on my face
The sun telling me love is too late
As the loneliness sets in the bottom of my stomach
my heart vomits....
pain and betrayal


How fragile I'd become, time after time I knew this time would come
When my eyes see no more, my hands become so soft they lose grip
My lips
become so silent because my hearts so numb
I knew, I KNEW I should have run


When you told me to cum , that my inside and out was safe in your hands
That’s when I should have ran


When life became to damn good, feeling like every day was made for me and you
 
thinking our love could carry loads of loneness and steal smiles
Feeling like I was the only girl you see in a mazy crowd
The irony of hurt that exhibits through your face that plays rewind in this confusing thing I call my mind
I should, I should have


Birds flee from the hidden meadow the grass compress group by group


then there you stand looking at me with my heart in your hands
I wish I was there to kiss you, but I already ran

© 2009 Kimberly Smith


Author's Note

Kimberly Smith
about a girl and hpw she is thinking this man is cheating on here because life was too good to be true with him and when he shows her he really loves her , she not there to hear or love him back because she didnt believe him and she left.

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Wow! What an amazing poem! I loved it! So many emotions... it was very passionate, yet sad, too. Awesome poem! It was very well written, wonderfully detailed, and greatly descriptive! Great use and variety of words! :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


It was written very well. Its sad and shows that not everything can be still and also shows that even if you have someones heart they can still run even though they loved.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very well done, I was impressed by the professionalism of this piece. Ran, Run... either way, you were not there to kiss the one you loved.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I loved this one, I really did.

My heart vomits pain and betrayal. That line was insane. Nicely done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


That's really good writing! very nice. I especially like the opening, but it all follows through really well.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Love it. Well worded, emotional and full of imagery.

Good job.

Posted 14 Years Ago



"How fragile I become, time after time I knew this time would come"
Great emotion I like this poem a lot!

Posted 14 Years Ago


well written!
Feeling regret before you're in too deep. it speaks true.

Posted 14 Years Ago


"then there you stand looking at me with my heart in your hands
I wish I was there to kiss you, but I already ran"

I absolutely loved how you ended this piece!!!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on May 15, 2009
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Kimberly Smith
Kimberly Smith

Charlotte, NC



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