Midnight thoughts

A girl wanted to love Yet falls for the wrong man

All she wanted was to love

To love a man 

But when she met you

She fears to love again 

Reviews

[Irenic]

this beautiful piece paints the picture of FEAR.
The wa you have described the fear of woman to fall in love with wrong man in just few lines should be appreciated.....
thanks for sharing :)

[andrew mitchell]

a theme of hurt resides in this lovely write leaving the reader to ponder.

[Coyote Poetry]

Love lesson make us fearful. To give heart away. A dangerous option sometimes. I liked the honest tone of your words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[zunie frost]

wow !! it's short but really well written

[BlakHeart]

Thank you very much

[zunie frost]

welcome!!!

[Ruth]

Such a concise form leads the reader to ponder why the fear...interesting impact...

[BlakHeart]

Thank you :)

[Ted Kniffen]

Brief. What did I do to her? A unique way to write a bit that drags the reader into the scenario.
I like it. Well done.