Return of the Guardian

True story from last night's occurrence. Also dedicated to the girl I love.

It happened last night,
Once again.
My demonic guardian,
And I connected within.

It sat in the tree
Outside my window.
And hooted all night.
Watching from high and low.

I know now that it is true.
We've a purpose,
Myself
And you.

Stay by my side,
And leave me not.
And this memory,
Shant be forgot.

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

It's pretty good I think, but it sort of gets ruined at the very end where the rhyme seems a little forced...I don't think it has to rhyme exactly and might even come over better (more relaxed) if you said Shall not be forgotten,,,Or,Won't be forgotten...just my opinion...I'm usually wrong

[Alexa Tasch]

I think its really cool how you ture something so simple into somethign like this. Very interesting and flows pretty well. Short but to the point. I loved it!

[Alex Vidmar]

Thanks :)

[Alexa Tasch]

Your welcome!

[Erin Thomas]

It is very to-the-point which makes it work more rhythmically. I think the shorter line affect the rhyme made in good time. Haha sorry, I was on a roll there. I like the intensity, it draws me in from the beginning. Good work!

[AK]

AwM such a nice and sweet poem! The imagery produced by it was brilliant! Loved it! Keep writing!

[Voncloud]

short and effective, it pulls me in =)

[V.J.C.]

The poem was very good, the flow was nicely done.
Thanks for the read.

[Tarry Franck]

Really like the flow of this piece. Great job.

[Brianna Van Zandt]

Very nice.