Tossing and turning

Tossing and turning

A Poem by Pimpinella
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My second poem to my girlfriend.

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I toss and turn in the night
ideas and images appearing left and right
words I want to say but are not right
so i begin to write in a speedy flight
you are the star that burns so bright
i think of you to sleep tonight

© 2008 Pimpinella


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nice rhyming... lol... only last sentence... if you could revise it a lil i wood sound better... nice job

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on April 1, 2008

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Pimpinella
Pimpinella

Rome, NY



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