The pretty facebook girl

I saw a pretty girl on facebook, and wrote my feelings down.

The pretty facebook girl:

Her picture brought a funny feeling to my stomach.
I didn't dare press the like button.
Knowing my skill with women, it would end in a heartache.

Her eyes as blue as the facebook bar on the top of the page.
Knowing she doesn't know I exist, it made me rage.

Although I still have hope, as her mother is in my friendlist.
I know her well, and maybe to my rage can she put a twist.

Maybe I'll meet her in real life, and see if she makes my jaw drop.
Or maybe the pretty facebook girl, just uses photoshop.

Author's Note

My first 'real' poem.

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

So you fell for for an Aviator?

[Sami Khalil]

A good first poem ...Pen on...:)

[J Todd Underhill]

I like this, some practice will make you and damned fine poet! I invite you to share this tonight on our show! www.kzkoradio.com 8pm MDT 10 Eastern 303-386-3598. I hope you will, this was great for a first effort!

[Kirbyfactor]

Afraid I won't be able to come to that show, when it is 8 pm there it is 4 AM here, but feel free to read it yourself and give me credit.