"Tears of Silver"

There is not much to say about this one...its pretty self explanitory

These tears of sliver,
Fall and crash against the hard floor,
My dreams drowning away,
I know not what to do,
My love flooding,
Pooling into the walkway,
My thoughts turning on my own mind,
I dont know what to do,
i dont know what to say,
My face cupped in my own soaking hands,
My body dwindelling away into nothing,
What to do,
Oh what to do,
I have no where to turn,
No were to go,
You are my love,
But I can’t even look at you,
Without thinking those words that I cannot say,
My depression is greater than i thought,
As those words apparate in my head,
I love you,
But I can’t tell you....

Reviews

[Tenten]

i've never felt this, i know whats its like to love somebody and them not know buts its always been the unrequited sort, this piece makes me think of so much more. beautiful.

[chris' girlfriend]

your poems are awesome!!