The Crush

The Crush

A Poem by ♍ Kirstin ♎

The Crush

 

It starts with a blush too much

The signal that you’re beginning a crush.

A few glimpses over their way

And eyes looking and wanting to stay.

 

A lingering touch... it’s just a little crush

Still hoping and praying he didn’t see you blush.

Laughing and joking then you begin some flirting

Then you realise you’re gonna start falling.

 

Then you finally hug and it feels so good,

Hoping he won’t let go and make you feel blue.

Pulling away, you don’t want to be rude

But damn it you really like this dude.


© 2011 ♍ Kirstin ♎



Author's Note

&#9805 Kirstin ♎
Still editing :) plus go easy on the criticism this was written within 5 mins No more Writer's Block!!!!! WOOOOOO!!!!!

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i miss this feeling, i haven't felt it in a very very very long time.

Posted 1 Year Ago


this, quite simply...
is alot of fun!

Posted 1 Year Ago


I love this!
So true :)
and it has a great flow x)
Wonderful write!

Posted 1 Year Ago



Charming write about a very potent emotion...!

Nicely rhymed, too!

Steel

Posted 1 Year Ago


LOl, i like it! it's fun and truthful. I personally kinda hate it when i have a crush, but there's nothing I can do about it. Love and infatuation are unavoidable. great write!

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Added on November 7, 2011
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&#9805 Kirstin ♎
♍ Kirstin ♎

None of your buissiness, Scotland, United Kingdom



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