Torment

Scream out loud, Scream out clear

'Cause that's the only thing

That you will hear

The glint of the instruments

The sharpness of the knife

The slit of the blade

All sharp and precise

Breath in deep, Breath in hard

'Cause that's the only time

That you get that card

The thump of your heart

The squish of your lungs

The liver apart

All in her arms

Scream out loud, Scream out clear

'Cause that's the only thing

That you will hear

Reviews

[Pearls Of Wisdom...Youn..]

The glint of the instruments
The sharpness of the knife
The slit of the blade
All sharp and precise

Wow! love the construction of words
Your poems might be short but the delivery is precise
Wise thoughts and words dedicated to creating this beautiful art-work
Nice Piece BrokenAngelicHeart Nice work!

[BrokenAngelicHeart]

O_O OOPS! XD I never had the habit of that.. ^^" Gonna change it now..