Blue

Blue

A Story by Kaliope

Eyes captivating 
like sky through a prison cell window
shyness trapped within frozen irises
bright as a Himalayan Poppy
environment a backdrop when in contrast
kaleidoscoping flecks are interwoven
crystalline with oceanic hues.

© 2017 Kaliope



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Oh my, such fantastic imagery you've provided us in a short poem...
"like sky through a prison cell window
shyness trapped within frozen irises"
I really liked these lines, as they gave emotion to the poem as well...
Keep it up

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Kaliope

6 Months Ago

Thanks! It's just starting out so we will see where it goes
Mr.Writer

6 Months Ago

No prob :)

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Added on January 4, 2017
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Kaliope
Kaliope

Denver, CO



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Experimental Writer Inspiration: My husband, Silente, as well as raw emotion, personal experience, nature, and simplicity. I write mostly modern fiction and poetry. more..

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