Coffee

Coffee

A Poem by Kaliope

Inhaling the earthy vapor, I take a fawn-colored sip.
Sweet and lively as Bambi.
The aching subsides.
My eyes are no longer drooping. 
On a plush love seat,
I'm swaddled in knit things. 
Warming my esophagus, I counter the nip of the draft.

© 2017 Kaliope



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' It's as sweet and lively as Bambi.'

As a coffee-plus drinker i so love your thinking! As to the way you've briefly but fully worded your poem, coffee takes on a near-nectar like meaning now - says I, sip-sipping my first cuppa of the day. Thank you so much..

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

emmajoy

1 Year Ago

Not sure where the other avatar came from but... anyway, lovely colour! I'd drink coffee in any for.. read more
Kaliope

1 Year Ago

Coffee is most definitely needed when wearing a hat :)
emmajoy

1 Year Ago

We share the same sense of humour... which reminds me, am due for a.... coffee! :)



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I always love when writers describe a word into many sentences.

Posted 8 Months Ago


such a perfect poem:) I love the thoughtful word choice and the cozy feeling that came through! made me want coffee and fuzzy blankets

Posted 1 Year Ago


i love coffee so much. this poem gave me a nice mid night reminder to the days of my addiction to coffee, but my love for it still prevails
great poem

Posted 1 Year Ago


Yes! I enjoyed this and look forward to a morning coffee. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Kaliope

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much :)
Haha bambi analogies always get me😢 Great job

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Ethan

1 Year Ago

Wow you're really in tune with Bambi aren't you😂
Kaliope

1 Year Ago

I literally just looked up Bambi 2 and saw Bambi 3
Ethan

1 Year Ago

Eh, it probably won't be any good
I love this description. As a former coffee addict now just a recreational user :p I think you captured the many faces of this glorious liquid beautifully.

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Kaliope

1 Year Ago

Thank you, it's funny how time seems to slow down when indulging in a drink that speeds things up.
This is very good,
really enjoyed this write,
Wonderful imagery.


Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Kaliope

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much
sounds like the perfect alone time! Just add a book in the equation and life's good!

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Kaliope

1 Year Ago

Yes a book, a reading nook, and sunlight would make it magical :)
I love coffee and I love this poem! Well done!!
Tabby

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Kaliope

1 Year Ago

Thank you :) it's meant to remind everyone of beauty in simplicity.

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Added on January 5, 2017
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Author

Kaliope
Kaliope

Denver, CO



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Experimental Writer Inspiration: My husband, Silente, as well as raw emotion, personal experience, nature, and simplicity. I write mostly modern fiction and poetry. more..

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