Softness of Rain Water

Softness of Rain Water

A Poem by Kaliope


Singing softer than water lingers
Crescent moon hovers above

Descend

Resting in nest with tune of dove
Wind ready to test the forest
Hints at temperament of tempest

Defend

© 2017 Kaliope



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"singing softer than water lingers"

That line makes no sense to me... mind helping me out there?

Actually, most of the lines in this poem don't make any sense. At all... not even abstractly. I think you just write stuff you think sounds cool without having any deeper meaning. A very shallow approach. Silente should not have brought you to my attention, I'm really not sure why he did. Oh well... here I am, blame him.

Posted 4 Months Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Kesha

4 Months Ago

You can not blame someone else for your abuse towards another. If you don't understand something or .. read more
Anyone who finds pleasure in the rain and is able to share it with others I'm in all the way

Posted 5 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Kaliope

5 Months Ago

I agree, it truly is calming, freeing and nourishing.
A peaceful, gentle and beautiful poem Kitten...
Well done, keep it up :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Kaliope

5 Months Ago

Thank you muchly
Mr.Writer

5 Months Ago

No problem :)

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Added on July 2, 2017
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Kaliope
Kaliope

Denver, CO



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Experimental Writer Inspiration: My husband, Silente, as well as raw emotion, personal experience, nature, and simplicity. I write mostly modern fiction and poetry. more..

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