Softness of Rain Water

Softness of Rain Water

A Poem by Kaliope

Singing softer than water lingers
Crescent moon hovers above


Resting in nest with tune of dove
Wind ready to test the forest
Hints at temperament of tempest


© 2017 Kaliope

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"singing softer than water lingers"

That line makes no sense to me... mind helping me out there?

Actually, most of the lines in this poem don't make any sense. At all... not even abstractly. I think you just write stuff you think sounds cool without having any deeper meaning. A very shallow approach. Silente should not have brought you to my attention, I'm really not sure why he did. Oh well... here I am, blame him.

Posted 12 Months Ago

0 of 2 people found this review constructive.


11 Months Ago

You can not blame someone else for your abuse towards another. If you don't understand something or .. read more
Anyone who finds pleasure in the rain and is able to share it with others I'm in all the way

Posted 1 Year Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


1 Year Ago

I agree, it truly is calming, freeing and nourishing.
A peaceful, gentle and beautiful poem Kitten...
Well done, keep it up :)

Posted 1 Year Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


1 Year Ago

Thank you muchly

1 Year Ago

No problem :)

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Added on July 2, 2017
Last Updated on July 3, 2017



Denver, CO

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