Tethered in Leisure

Tethered in Leisure

A Poem by Kaliope

Steamy dreamer wakes with fever
With looming fortune
Gloomy weather
Heather feathers hang off leather
Roomy measure swooning
Tethered in leisure

© 2017 Kaliope



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Bo
Could you explain each line except the third? I'm curious to know what this means.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Are you a 12 year old girl? Your rhymes are basic and intellectual content tethered to your stupid playground rhymes as opposed to actual logic. Your not a writer you're a rhymer... and not a very good one at that. I don't know why that Silente chick recommended your writing... that thing has bad taste. (did I already mention that? I'm here because of him).

Posted 3 Months Ago


0 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Kesha

3 Months Ago

Do you get off on picking on people? Sick a*s. Quit commenting if you don't like it, no need at all .. read more

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Kaliope
Kaliope

Denver, CO



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Experimental Writer Inspiration: My husband, Silente, as well as raw emotion, personal experience, nature, and simplicity. I write mostly modern fiction and poetry. more..

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