The Silence of My Bleeding Heart

The Silence of My Bleeding Heart

A Story by Kittyskittles

I feel so lost and alone
This silence really takes a toll
I can feel my heart beat
To the saddest melody
Even my head adds to the sympathy
With my cries and thoughts in my mind
Tell me how love can be the opposite of kind
Everything seems broken and thrown away
I didn't know I could mess up love this much till today
Loving another feels like a curse
I have everything I need so why do I feel this hurt
Happiness is what I should be, with the one I see currently
But my heart got tangled in this mess
And now I'm not ready to confess
I just want to be with the one I'm with
However things got complicated till no end
Not only does my heart yield for her 
But she doesn't want me and that burns
I shouldn't love her like I do
But my heart wants her so
Even if I need to let her go
So you see my silence here tonight
I set here in the dark while my heart fights
If only I didn't have to think about how love bites
How I just want to be with the one who has the other set of rings
But I can't get a hold of anything it seems


© 2015 Kittyskittles



Author's Note

Kittyskittles
Love is not always easy....

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Thank you for this beautiful piece! I can relate to your choice of words. I am a fan of the title as well!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Unrequited love is the hardest of all. Inspires some great poems though... this is one... Ive plenty up on the topic too, alas... Im a bit of an expert in the genre if not in writing itself!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Beautiful and amazing use of words.
"I shouldn't love her like I do
But my heart wants her so
Even if I need to let her go
So you see my silence here tonight
I set here in the dark while my heart fights
If only I didn't have to think about how love bites"
The above lines were outstanding. I could feel the yearning and the need. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


Kittyskittles

2 Years Ago

Thank you for the kind words. I wrote this out of pure emotion hoping that some how it would help me.. read more
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Was written with skill and emotion. You are welcome.
Beautiful and so bittersweet.
I didn't know I could mess up love this much till today
Loving another feels like a curse
I have everything I need so why do I feel this hurt.
This is exactly what love does to us. Scientists research say that falling in love is literally the same as being drugged. Funny, right?

Posted 2 Years Ago


Kittyskittles

2 Years Ago

It is. It's funny how love can be so painful and so rewarding as well
Really great writing. I could really relate to it and it's truthful sadness.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Kittyskittles

2 Years Ago

Thank you.

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Added on August 14, 2015
Last Updated on August 16, 2015
Tags: pain, love, straight, broken heart, hurt

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Kittyskittles
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Hey! My names Alex and I have recently found out that I adore writing. I have always wrote little poems when I feel sad but lately I'm starting to realize how much I truly love writing. more..

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