Where the Flowers Bloom

Where the Flowers Bloom

A Poem by Knightingale

Marigolds and roses
never wilted
always blooming
amongst lilacs
and green leaves
and your smile
consuming
the heart of a child
who believes
the flowers always bloom.

The window panes
of this flower shop
view your father's bookstore
just across the block;
where you smile
from over the dog-eared pages
of another world.

I remember the summer
we ran to the West Sea
because you believed
there were brighter shades of green
and I believed
there the flowers always bloomed.

And when we were older
the West Sea became for you
University grounds
and for me
French coastal towns
where I found
the flowers in bloom.

But too soon
they grew weak
wilted and died;
petals falling on the cheek
of a girl who cried
because she couldn't keep them alive
though she tried
though she tried.

© 2013 Knightingale


Author's Note

Knightingale
I have this formatted a certain way but because I type with my phone it doesn't seem to want to do it right. Either way let me know what you think :)

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sad, and beautiful
lovely poem :)


Posted 10 Years Ago


Knightingale

10 Years Ago

Thank you again :)
ok its official. I love your poetry.so moving , so emotion and image filled. wonderful

Posted 10 Years Ago


Knightingale

10 Years Ago

That truly means a lot, considering how much I love your writing. Thank you.
BillTemple

10 Years Ago

then we have a mutual admiration society
Knightingale

10 Years Ago

Haha lol I like that. Well put.
This fantastic, the repetition at the end really seals it in, the sadness is palpable and the nostalgia is fantastic, great write!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Knightingale

10 Years Ago

Once again, I appreciate the kind words.
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So very moving, really enjoyed this...you write so very well :) x

Posted 10 Years Ago


Knightingale

10 Years Ago

That means a lot. I enjoy your writing so your compliments mean a lot.
I love your style . You begins with life and ends with a bit of sorrow. In the 3rd and 4th verses there is an inclusion of togetherness....you put a lot of feelings in the whole.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Knightingale

10 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)
Rose of many colours

10 Years Ago

Welcome honey .This is your season.

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Knightingale
Knightingale

Blythewood, SC



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I enjoy writing about life. Attempting to capture moments. Sometimes I write poems, sometimes stories. While some of my materials may sound morbid or cynical, I'm truly a romantic at heart. Unfortunat.. more..

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