Forgotten

There you are everlasting dream

Please dont bring the tears to me

For i dont care

I wont show pity

Words are spoken

True feeling are shown

 

So the everlasting dream

That you thought would last forever

Actually didnt really last at all

Now we go are seprate ways

Goodbye my friend

I lay you down

With the rest of the dead forgotten dreams

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[ShaneBerry]

for the past five years of my life i was in a dream... well kind of a dreamish nightmare, its a long boring story that makes me look like a chump lol. basically i was being played, anyways, this poem right here relates to that. and being the one who had to sever the tie to the dream, and watch it die. but in the end we are liberated right? lol. this write, and "You Changed ME" have touched me bro (no homo lol) they hit home for me very closely and i am very glad i have gotten to see these! great work! this is legit right here!


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[Arianna]

its good :)