Is This How I'm Supposed To Feel?

 

 

I just can't help but look at you and think

"Is something more here? Right beyond the brink?"

You make me laugh, I understand

If it's intimidating when I ask you to hold my hand

But still, you make me wonder if it's worth it

But still you make question all of it

I'm being too hasty, I'm making quick judgement

I can't quite shake myself from my fast-paced ailments

 

So tell me, friend

If it's okay to kiss your forehead

And tell me when

I'm making it a more-than-friendship

I don't wanna rush

But friend I miss you much

 

So is it like or is it love?

I can't tell, the world is swirling all above

Me? I don't know. I haven't got it figured out

But you're kinda cute when you make that joking pout

I can't help but wonder if there may just be something more

I won't ask you for fear of you walking right out the door

No questions, no comments

No life altering statements

 

Is this how I am supposed to feel?

Sometimes I can't tell if any of this is even real

So please remind me, so I can tell you

How I'm feeling and what I'd like to do

You're a song stuck in my head that I can't quite ignore

But uncertainty stops me from asking the DJ for more

So please, don't mind me if I stop to stare

I'm trying to decipher if I should ever really care

It's nothing bad I'm sure

Please dont act so immature!

 

It's like a scientist being asked to prove the existance of feelings

I dont know what to say, so I'll pretend I didn't hear it

But you are just so amazing sometimes

I wish I could tell you whats on my mind

But I'm too weak, I'm still so confused

Somebody, anybody, what do I do!?

 

I think I'm in like with you

But I'm unsure if this is true

So don't take it the wrong way

If I remain quiet the whole day

 

The last person to hold my heart

Broke it, ripped it, and blew it apart

If kept the pieces in a jar

And hidden it extremely far

But like Flynn Rider, you found the impossible

So now I'm shaking now, because this is actual

 

Forgive me, I'm going in circles now

But don't worry, I'll figure it out somehow

These screams won't go on for too long

So, for now, just continue to play your song

 

 

 

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

The meter is fine , but you may be out of gas.
I think you think too much and
Life will just continue no matter what happens
to us, so rlax and enjoy it
It is only here for a little while
You write well
------ John

[selkietales]

Sooo cuuuuuuute! Since the picture is of Ed is this for Winry?
"It's like a scientist being asked to prove the existance of feelings
I dont know what to say, so I'll pretend I didn't hear it," is my favorite part :P
Anyway, I don't think the meter is off at all, it flows really well and I thought it was great and I don't even usually like poetry.

[Crystal Marie Rome]

This is so beautiful. I absolutely love the last line, it holds a lot of meaning. Amazing job.
Do your best!
P.S. I like the picture of Edward!!! :)

[MadeCheaply]

I really like, but I wanna know who it's about.

[Boldpen]

WOW!... this piece was fantastic! I really liked it.... Definitely there was some rhythm there. And I DO NOT THINK THE METER IS OFF AT ALL.
You really made me swing while reading this. some expressions given are wonderfully cool.....
Nice job!