My body and thorns aren't everything

My body and thorns aren't everything

A Poem by 송지석 / Ji-Suk

I wanna jump over the walls of my heart and breathe
Because I know the hand that reached out to me 
It's over, there's no one
No one cares about me because I'm a good for nothing

"Don't leave me" I cried out but everyone left 
I will endure anything despite this crack in my heart
Try hurting me, I'm okay, I'm not afraid anymore 
Shove me till the end, I'm okay
I'm not easily broken

My body and thorns aren't everything 
Look inside me, at the real me
Come to me warmly 
Please, just one person, even if it's you

I'm yearning for love
Don't throw me away, please don't throw me away, I'm begging you

I will endure anything despite this crack in my heart
Try hurting me, I'm okay, I'm not afraid anymore 
Shove me till the end, I'm okay
I'm not easily broken

© 2018 송지석 / Ji-Suk


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emotional as always my friend.
It radiates strength and hope. i enjoyed it

Posted 5 Years Ago


 송지석 / Ji-Suk

5 Years Ago

I’m glad you enjoyed it. THanks!
I liked the real life tone of the words. I liked the honest statements. A lot of truth in the words. I enjoyed this poem. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


 송지석 / Ji-Suk

5 Years Ago

Thanks! I am flattered that you called it amazing c:
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

It is a amazing poem and you are welcome.
Although this poem doesn't really have flow, it more than makes up for it with the level of emotion it conveys, and with the fluidness with which that emotion is poured into the words. Perseverance is key to getting stronger, and you come across as somebody who knows this very well. Overall, this is a solid, heartfelt piece you've written. Awesome job, man, and may you keep on marching onwards! :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


 송지석 / Ji-Suk

5 Years Ago

Thanks very much! c:
Another emotional piece, I loved it. I often feel this way too so I'm being able to relate to this so much. Good job, Ji-Suk!

Posted 5 Years Ago


 송지석 / Ji-Suk

5 Years Ago

Thank you! I am glad! c:
it is too emotional and expressive. time for you to open your heart and love freely.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Wow, this poem is really great. I kind understand how you feel, I feel this way sometimes.

Posted 5 Years Ago



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