Will you come for me .. ??

I am waiting for you..my sweetheart..

Nothing hurts than losing beloved,

that too without even knowing the reason..

None understands the depth of those cry ..

 

Even tears are ready to pour out,

why can’t you open up, my sweetheart..

Were I not that close to you??

Am I not your’s? How can you

leave your shonaa in the middle of the ocean,

for she came closing her eyes in the name of you ..

 

When I was going alone in my life path,

though not happily, but not sadly,

you came all the way long and lifted

me with your unbelievable love and care..

 

The way you narrated your observation of

me in class made me stunned. You are such

an awesome person to be with. Only your picture

persists in my eyes.The way your eyes saw me,

 

the trick you played to be with me for some

more time in lunch break,  I expected this will last ever..

forever..

 

As rainbow lasts only for few seconds, though beautiful

you too were in my life for only few months. The golden

memories gave me an everlasting weep in my life !

 

 You, were with me, sitting near me,

making me laugh, holding my hands

and bestowing about your life with

me.. The dream guy that any girl could dream of..

 

You would slapped me if I had committed mistake,

but this silence pricks me, kills me again and

again in my grave also. Now I can’t see anyone,

anything ‘cause I could see only your face,

your hands, your smile !!

 

Heart neither hears the mind nor the truth

that you are not mine. It calls  you badly

to cry in your shoulder, to smile with you, to

hug you. Heart never lends it’s ears when

when it’s friends say he is no longer your’s !!

Pity heart now doesn’t know the path, the place

and has become blind now..

Has your heart become deaf? Don’t you

hear your shonaa’s silent weep and sadness..?

Come on dear, come for me, I am missing you

badly, deeply, worsely. Come, wipe my tears

with your hand, hug me and portray that

you’re for me only.. Will you return, my sweetie??

Author's Note

Waiting for your feel about this..

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is a emotional ride into powerful words and thoughts.
"Am I not your’s? How can you
leave your shonaa in the middle of the ocean,
for she came closing her eyes in the name of you .."
I liked the above lines the best. The complete poem was direct and honest tone, I liked. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Kousika]

First I move into their world.. Then only i start writing.. Hope i'm doing good by making other's feel
for my poem..

[Coyote Poetry]

You did. Your words powerful and the tone of truth.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!
this moved me........such love and pain......
i know of this......it is ugly.....
i felt the sadness and longing.....
much passionate write......
i esp. loved the use of 'shonaa'.......
beautiful poem!!!
i loved it!!!
:)

[Kousika]

Thanks great man..

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome great poet!!! :) :)