She with a tin

She with a tin

A Poem by Kousika

She kept on the table, a sweet zin
Fight arose among the kin
All started playing a game
It involved the world fame
But this time they played with a tin !!!!

© 2015 Kousika



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this is wonderful..........
can't say about limericks.......do not know.
still i liked it very much.......!!!
:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Kousika

2 Years Ago

Oh .. Thanks poet..
I do not see why it would not be so. I think it has all the qualities to qualify. If it feels good to you now, use it. if not, lightly polish but do not rub hard!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Kousika

2 Years Ago

Thank you for encouraging me ... I know it obeys all the rules .. Hope will soon get well versed soo.. read more
This is my new limerick .. Does it look so ?? please review it and your suggestion is needed ..

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Kousika
Kousika

Tamil Nadu, India



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