When Tears Form

When Tears Form

A Poem by Krista Weiss
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This is a song about bullying and people treating you cruelly. Hope you like it! The hidden message is: I love you because I have to <3 Enjoy... hope this helps anyone who can relate :)

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When Tears Form
And once again,
You've pointed out my flaws,
I know what they are,
But you've gotta tell them to the world,
I feel like your punching bag,
Using words to knock me around,
You do it for everyone to see,
And you show it to the world
You treat me,
Like I am a nobody,
You just sit and call me names,
Right to my face,
Everybody stops and stares,
But no one seems to care,
And I'm scared to shed a tear,
You should know that you're mean when tears form
But I guess it was fault,
Cuz I gotta pick words more carefully,
Cuz if I say something wrong,
You twist it up and throw it back at me,
They hit me right smack dab in the heart,
Cuz don't you know I take it personally,
People just stop and stare,
While you show the whole world
You treat me,
Like I am a nobody,
You just sit and call me names,
Right to my face,
Everybody stops and stares,
But no one seems to care,
And I'm scared to shed a tear,
You should know that you're mean when tears form
Baby why are you doing this to me,
I can remember back when,
You were kind,
And I could feel alive
You treat me,
Like I am a nobody,
You just sit and call me names,
Right to my face,
Everybody stops and stares,
But no one seems to care,
And I'm scared to shed a tear,
You should know that you're mean when tears form
When tears form,
I'm scared to shed a tear,
You did this all to me honey,
You should know that you're mean when tears form <3

© 2012 Krista Weiss


Author's Note

Krista Weiss
Sooo... I hope you like it! If you're wondering I wrote this song about my sister. For some reason it seems like she finds excuses to make fun of me and one night I was really sad about it so I wrote this... Hope you like! <3

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Ok, first of all i had like 42 RR before yours but when i saw Taylor Swift Teardrops on my guitar's picture i couldn't resist ! I have known her for a little time but i can't stop listening to her, she's my second favourite singer :)
Now, coming to your poem, pardon, song:
You must have worked a lot on it because it's beautiful, it's simple but expressive, i don't live in US, here where i live bullying exists but it's not so "common" so i can't relate very easily, anyway i can feel empathy to the "protagonist" of the song, just one thing: I would kill to get the guitar playing it, could you post the link to it in the author's note?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Dominic_995: Thanks so much! :) And sorry I haven't made the guitar part for this song yet but when I do I'll be sure to post them on here :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ok, first of all i had like 42 RR before yours but when i saw Taylor Swift Teardrops on my guitar's picture i couldn't resist ! I have known her for a little time but i can't stop listening to her, she's my second favourite singer :)
Now, coming to your poem, pardon, song:
You must have worked a lot on it because it's beautiful, it's simple but expressive, i don't live in US, here where i live bullying exists but it's not so "common" so i can't relate very easily, anyway i can feel empathy to the "protagonist" of the song, just one thing: I would kill to get the guitar playing it, could you post the link to it in the author's note?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I knew it! this is a song :) very good! I liked it so much..like soooooooooo much :)))))

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 13, 2012
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