I thought Part 2 (she's the one)

Don't read this without reading she's the one

I am numb now

I thought you felt the same

Is it true that you don't

I thought you loved me

So I said I love you

I thought you were the one

So I felt like telling you myslfe

I thought because you're grounded but you work for my mom and dad

I could tell you how I felt.

So I figured out you did not feel the same darn way

I thought that you did

Reviews

[chloe cruz]

Nice write. Reading the other reviews, I'm getting the idea you're new-ish to poetry, and for a new poet, this was pretty good. The flow was nice. Thanks for entering my contest, The Heart's Demise! And once again, it's a good write. :]

Chloe.

[TessaLee]

Wait Kris i am really lost!

[Sharkapillar]

Dude you're getting better at this poetry thing now that she dumped you (usually the case with peeps today...my poetry SUCKED until i got all saddddd)
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