Only Place left to Go

Only Place left to Go

A Poem by Kristin
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Love is not something easy to move on from, and sometimes is impossible for life to answer.

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There are places that I dream of going

but I could never go with you.

It would bring up the unfinished trail

 that was made by a special two

My journey put on halt on that day an envelope labeled fate came to her door

My beautiful bride put to rest by a disease with no cure

Do not take offense, this is time’s evil foul

For if I had not met her first,

 you would be the one to have my vows

I mean no harm by this,

just putting up my humble views

For if I don’t, it may bring up the past I had with her,

 that I can never have with you.

So my love, there is no time to waste there is much for us to explore

You pick the weapon of your choice, and together we will go through death’s door

© 2017 Kristin


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Beautiful poem. :) You made it seem like you were painting a picture using words.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Kristin

7 Years Ago

Thank You. Haha yes words can be my paint.
Oh dear this is so sad. I hope the gun and 'death's door' were just metaphors! There are plenty more fish in the sea.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Kristin

7 Years Ago

yes metaphors to invoke the power that previous love can have on someone and how hard it can be to m.. read more
Love is not something easy to move on from, and sometimes is impossible for life to answer. Yes you're absolutely right. I can relate myself with this. The title is perfect "Only Place left to Go"

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Kristin

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much for this. I find it amazing how both painful and amazing love can be, and how the .. read more
Writer at last! Sky ~

7 Years Ago

Welcome friend. Yes anything can at anything time. That's LIFE
Kristin

7 Years Ago

too true. Keep all friends close

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Added on January 23, 2017
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Kristin
Kristin

Palm Coast, FL



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Hello, I am currently a sophomore in college and love to write. I have many hobbies that include basketball motorcycles and much more. I love human nature and exploring this world with my friends. more..

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