Broken Wings

Getting taken advantage of by someone you care deeply about.

Though my heart aches 
Every time I think of you
My body also shakes
From all of the left over residue

One time was never enough
My heart was strong 
But my body wasn't so tough

I was a bird flying freely through the wind when you had spotted me that day.
 Our feathers aligned but our souls played different games.
If I could go back before you broke those free birds wings to avoid your sight. 
 I would in a heartbeat, but now I must heal and take flight

But never again will All of me ever fly in the sky so blue
Cause now a part of me is gone and left with you....

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

Seems that you rushed this a little, sort of got carried away. If you are going to rhyme poetry you need to keep to a pattern if not you still need to follow some sort of rhythm You also do not need both left over and residue in the same line as they mean the same thing. I can see what you are trying to achieve but it still needs some work. You have the will so there WILL be a way