One sided love

Nobody hears when you scream

Nobody cares if you die

Don't let it be heard or be seen

The apple of your eye, can kill you.

 

I've died long before,

Heaven holds me,

I can't see you anymore,

Save your sweet good-byes.

 

Creeping over the step,

My shadow, knocks on the door.

Days are endless,

If your not in my life.

I wanna grow old and die with you.

 

My Tinkerbelle,

You fade slowly to,

But not the way I did,

You never cared.

As agony grips me tight.

I still beg for your happiness.

 

God I beg of you,

Save me from this plight,

Send me angels,to bed.

Keep the devils very far.

For even if you hate me

I'll love you from afar.

 

I whisper for your nature.

I only hope the best,

I keep holding my memory

How short or meaningless it seems.

I'd love you even if you cut me in two.

And only your sweet voice can bring me back to life.

With my one-sided love.

Reviews

[Missy Moooooo]

This poem is deep and thoughtful, great write.

[Jenni-Chan]

ummm. you don't truly feel like this right? if you do. you don't take it to this extreme right?

[Thea]

Haha! The title really, really, really caught my attention!!! XD
This piece is full of powerful emotions...Though poignant, I still think that you did a great job here expressing your own feelings...
Not being loved back is just freaking hurtful! XD
Wonderful poem...You did well here...
:)))

[Priscilla Sayers]

Unrequited love can be a torturous fate. I can feel the sorrow drip from each verse. "I'll love you from afar" a line that rips at the heart and as you pray for that love to be happy, your selfless shines through. A great poem.

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

i really liked this...very emotional and just overall it had amazing flow and just a powerful message...

[Break The Broken]

wow. i love the message and the whole thing in general great flow!
best part:
Creeping over the step,
My shadow, knocks on the door.
Days are endless,
If your not in my life.
I wanna grow old and die with you.