Why won't you travel some more!

Why won't you travel some more!

A Poem by Krutika
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I am officially in a vacation hangover! So I thought I ought to write it off.. 😁😂

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Backpack strapped shoulders sway
Beside, the campfire smoulders away
Remnants of music still play
Inside my mind on replay!

Witness the night sky receding above
as the dawn leisurely lights the cove
Boots plod the dirt below
amongst scent wafted ginger lily yellow

Memories amass, like a crown of sycamore
photographic, reminiscent furthermore
Mirth is waiting to be explored
Why won't you travel some more!

© 2017 Krutika



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Krutika
Thanks for reading :) I appreciate it!

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Smiling and wishing through your words to truly journey far and wide. Your poetry dances like the notes of a song, and it awakens those places of courage within to take another step, another path into the wilderness. Wondrous! :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


This totally reminded me of back pack adventures from my younger days. Great feel to it, of freedom.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Krutika

8 Months Ago

Thanks for stopping by and reviewing it. I am glad that it evoked some happy memories for you :)
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8 Months Ago

You're welcome. :)
Haha, travelling is the best experience one can get, hope you enjoyed...:)

Posted 9 Months Ago


Krutika

9 Months Ago

Yeah.. Sure did :)
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Sky
Travelling oh yes, I think even I need a break from hectic work life ....

Posted 9 Months Ago


Krutika

9 Months Ago

Haha.. It's refreshing for sure. 👍Thanks for stopping by.
Sky

9 Months Ago

Yes it's refreshing and your most welcome my dear friend :)
Yes....I really need a break and want to travel. This is a very beautiful write. Makes me wanna travel. Well done I liked the imagery.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Krutika

9 Months Ago

Konkan in India. Did scuba diving 😊
Najam Us Saher

9 Months Ago

Whoa. That's great. It's a thrilling experience. 😀
Krutika

9 Months Ago

Yeah it sure is :)

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