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Untitled

A Poem by Wolf

Waking up in the morning,

I think I'm still dreaming,

'Cause an angel lays by my side...

And I ask myself:


"Do I really deserve such a wonderful woman?!"


I remember our first day,

How no words I could say...

My gestures were my words...

"Pfff! What are the odds?

A girl like you...

With a boy like me...

It will never be

A story true..."


But wrong was I,

For you didn't say "Goodbye!",

You hold me by the neck

Before going home, back.


I still remember little things

That life brings,

Like a bird's sing...

Like a small ring...


You are my sun!

Ohhh! What have I done

To have you in my life?!

Ohhh...in my life...


I wasn't the loving kind...

Before you, I was blind!

You showed me the ways

To fully live my life and days!


After all this time,

I said Love's not worth a dime...

But after all your love,

I know that you're an angel fallen from above.


Never said it out loud,

Never said it at all.

That's why...

Before I go,

I want to say...

I love you!


And now...

As the Fullmoon shines,

My heart dies...

But my love will remain

No matter...how...you'll...play...

© 2012 Wolf


Author's Note

Wolf
Haven't written in rhymes for a while and I haven't written anything for a LONG time ( sorry! :( )...hope I haven't forgot how to combine words to make them rhyme like I always did :D

Sorry for the name...Some might say I took it from Simple Plan's song, [Untitled], but I didn't! I just didn't knew how to name this writing, so I let it "Untitled".

Reviews will be greatly appreciated!

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well it sounds more like a story than a poem except with the rhymes thrown in and its romance its not really my thing i dont really do romance things so i think others would like it its just not my thing

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wolf

11 Years Ago

I know it sounds like a story...All my 'tries' to write a new poem turns to have a drop of story in .. read more
I love this! It's quite adorable... you sound like a lucky guy. Very nice.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wolf

11 Years Ago

Yeah, well...I am lucky...I'm with her for like 4 years. And at first I was the geek of the school. .. read more
That_Girl

11 Years Ago

Haha that's awesome. I wish you both the best. :)
a truelly romantic piece :) i wish i can find a woman like that :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 2, 2012
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Tags: love, remembrance, relation, heart, time, you

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Wolf
Wolf

Resita, Romania



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