Away

You're walkin' away...
Fading away!
Turning your back on me,
For I'm not the one you're here to see...

I'm just a shadow of your past,
One that will never last
Not even in the nearest sight,
Or in the weakest light.

You're so far away...
Drifting away!
With no things to say,
Our memories turn grey...

You divide us so quickly...
Never thought for you was so easy,
Kickin' all that was to the ground
Until you hear no sound.

You've gone away...
Far away!
You took me in a place of my dreams...
(Spoken: I should have known) Nothing's what it seems!

You're going away!
Drifting away from me!
In a place I cannot see!
You're fading away!
Far away...

Author's Note

I just finished this, in like 5-10 minutes (max). I have in mind how the lyrics should sound, but I need the instrumental part :)

Reviews

[Makayla Danielle<3]

I like this. Very nice(:

[TheAdamBryant]

took you 10 minutes to do an amazing poem

[That_Girl]

Haha I already reviewed this but I stand by what I said... the repetition is good and the rhyming is smooth. I like it. :)

[Allie]

Sounds like it would make a good song. I'm not sure if you have checked out my song "Pretty Box of Lies" but it is similar to this so you might like it, also there is a link to the music. This is very powerful and emotional, it brings up memories and I can relate to it, all these things make a good song.

[The Refined Poet]

this is an amazing piece... I can almost hear the song. excellent poem.

[afra]

its a awesome poem ...well done

[Crazy Cat Man]

I would love to hear the music to these lyrics :) great piece by the way. lost loves...we can forever write about that

[Wolf]

You and I, my friend...THAT'S the reason why I want to learn to play an acoustic guitar...it would be perfect!

[That_Girl]

I like the repetition... it really works well. Good job!