Dancing with Fire

Another poem that I wrote...well...they are more like lyrics. This is what I got when I was out on a picnic with some friends :)

The sign of power

Is stored in the Tower!

It grew in the flame

We see and blame!

A blazing Sentinel is watching

While at fire we're gazing!

You stole the light

From the blazing sight!

A fire never to cage

For the sake of Revenge!

Give me fire

From the Blazing Sire!

I want fire!

Because that's my desire!

Spoken: A dangerous game I play,

While the light fades away...

With fire from fire,

A hero is born...

To be our Sire!

A new day falls down,

Fast, without a sound.

A new flame burning!

A new hero fighting!

Don't hold me here!

I want to feel the flame!

The burning Flame!!

The Flame of Life!

Spoken: I want to see the fire...

Burning!

Forging...

The throne for our Sire!

The fire that never burns away,

Knowing that you will stay

Near the fire of my heart

From the blazing start!

Spoken: I want fire...

To satisfy...my...desire!

For within Fire I was born,

And within Fire I shall fall...

Reviews

[justjenn_2u]

This reminds me of a book I read - Pilgrim's Progress. This is unique and well written. You are quite descriptive. This is truly a masculine piece and I enjoyed.

[Belle]

Wow Zoltan, this is simply brilliant both in thought and in style!
I love how you played with the words; your choices made the
poem so mellifluous to read.

'will be reading more of your work
Belle~

[0AudreyClaire0]

That was pretty interesting. I really liked it. You did a good job with the rhyming. :)
-Aud