fatigue, my friend

fatigue, my friend

A Poem by poddar kushal

Fatigue, my friend!

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Fatigue is a friend I owe my life.

Closed mind sometimes likes to take a stride

With its hand held in hand, amid trees.

Fatigue is used to sit on cold benches.

Ambitious sun working in shadows…

Talkative we are not, dust settles

On the spread of pasture of silence.

At last fatigue coughs to end a span

While I return to a waiting day

 I can see fatigue is petering

Still without any thing to say…

 


© 2008 poddar kushal



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clever work...humanizing a human emotion that we rarely consider as a muse.
"Still without any thing to say�"

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like how you personalized Fatigue.
Really creative thought.
Good write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


interesting word usage..great write! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


as one inflicted with chronic fatigue, i must say that it is definitely a coin with two sides: it is crippling, inhibitive, and a cruel taskmaster; and yet it is a call to rest, to shrug off the screaming urgency of the miniscule daily tasks and surrender to the charm and needful sleep. so there are days like today, where i can say yes, fatigue can be a friend. to drift through life with a closed mind, not dwelling or thinking or choosing, now that is rest. i feel this is well done and very relatable to everyone at one time or another.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fatigue has a major effect on how we live. I can tell you know the power of getting rest. Very descriptive!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Another great poem and fatigue is something I battle on a daily basis

Posted 11 Years Ago


I'm looking at fatigue in a totally different light now. Not sure I can say it is my friend.....well done work here

Posted 11 Years Ago


Interesting thought processes at work here. I'm finding myself wanting to know what inspired you to write this one. It's an invoking piece.

Dave

Posted 11 Years Ago


That is really something to meditate upon. I have never spent much time thinking about fatigue... I usually just feel it. LOL Wonderful thought provoking work. Thank you for sharing this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


That was a fatiguing read. :) Just kidding. I like this. Never really viewed it as a friend. Well crafted.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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poddar kushal
poddar kushal

kolkata, India, India



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life and trying to earn bread made me an advocate. mad at my own stressful self, turned to writing. poems mainly. but, there are several short stories published in my mother toungue 'bengali'.i live i.. more..

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