They don't have a clue...

They don't have a clue...

A Poem by Love-shadowed Silhouettes
"

I really need to start planning this stuff out, but for now its still "on a whim" So yeah...

"

Nowhere.

Or so it seems.

That's where I  belong.

Or so it seems.

 

Does everyone

truly have

a place in the

world?

 

Or is it just a

one of God's cruel

tricks, on his

"devine" creations.

 

If we do each

truly have

a place in the

world,

 

why is does

it take so

long for us

to find it?

 

Will I ever have

a place to go?

A  safe haven

away from them?

 

Them: those

misunderstanding

narcissistic

freaks.

 

The ones that

call me a freak.

How wrong

they are.

 

They insist

a place for

everyone. I

doubt that.

 

A place for

me? The one

they could

never, ever

                   understand.

Never, ever

                   comprehend.

Never, ever 

                   justify.

                                      Fix.

                    Forgive.

But you can't

forgive some-

one, you don't

know sinned.

 

You can't fix

something you

don't know is

broken.

 

You can't

justify some-

one, you don't

know is wrong.

 

                     ... to be continued

 


© 2010 Love-shadowed Silhouettes



Author's Note

Love-shadowed Silhouettes
I wrote to be continued because I think it needs a few more verses but I don't think I should write them right now because I'm distracted... but do you agree? I'd like to know what you thought overrall and if you agree a few more verses would be good. Thanks :)

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Its a very honest poem... Things a lot of people have troubles with on a daily basis. Reminds me of a song "what a shame- shinedown". But this poem was beautifully written and i really enjoyed reading it. As for the more verses, it would really depend on what you might come up with, it could make the poem better, or shatter the delecacy... Very well done

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Its a very honest poem... Things a lot of people have troubles with on a daily basis. Reminds me of a song "what a shame- shinedown". But this poem was beautifully written and i really enjoyed reading it. As for the more verses, it would really depend on what you might come up with, it could make the poem better, or shatter the delecacy... Very well done

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 27, 2010
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Love-shadowed Silhouettes
Love-shadowed Silhouettes

Montreal, Canada



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Hey, I'm a teen writer from Montreal. I started writing on this site to promote my blog but then I realised I enjoyed this much more then the blog...:P I've attempted to write a few scripts and scre.. more..

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