You + me forever more

I'm loooking at the clock

watching the hands move slowly

only 8 more hours

till i get to see you

 

I need to see your smile

I need to see your face

I need to feel your lips

I need to hold your hand

 

Your hands are rough

but i don't care

it's where mine belong

right there with yours

 

It's 8 hours later

I'm waiting for you to show up

I look at my phone

Oh! theres a text from you

 

As i read the text

i start to cry

you said we're not working out

this is goodbye

 

so i sit alone

and cry all night

i hear my phone

but dont go check it

 

it keeps going off

i finally get up

its from you...

 

you tell me to look outside

i look out the window

and i see you

 

i go outside

you have a rose

your siting on the back of your truck

 

i climb on the with you

and you say im sorry

i didnt want a girlfriend

 

i start to cry

but then you wipe my tears

and you say you want a wife

 

you get on one knee

with a ring in your hand

you look at me and say

"will you marry me"

 

i start crying tears of joy

i hug you tight

and say of course!<3

 

its you and me forever more<3

Reviews

[TheAdamBryant]

best end for a nice poem

[J. Viands]

I like it, it tells a story and keeps strong emotion but towards the bottom it gets a lil rocky

[Steven Cash]

This really happened to you?

A bit cruel, but glad it worked :)

[SouthernBelle]

it didnt really happen lol but it was a dream i had the other day lol

[MissEpic2902]

AW!!! If this is a true event then OMG Congrats!! and this is unbelievable!! I love it!!

[SouthernBelle]

aww well thank you

[MissEpic2902]

You're welcome :)