Standing there

Sitting there

looking out the window

watching the rain drops

falling

 

Thinking

as I lay my head

against the cold glass

I see you

 

Your standing there

waiting for someone

I lay my head on my knees

and cry

 

You used to be there

waiting for me

but I've been replaced

I see you kiss her

 

It's so cold outside

I see you walk by

she's cold

you give her your jacket

 

I still wish that was me

as you walk past the window

I stare at you

you smile that fake little smile

 

I miss you

as I sit there

I think of here

I went wrong

 

What I did to lose you

I see you in the hall

I just my head

It's not the same

 

Not being with you

It's getting colder

the rain is falling more

the wind is blowing harder

 

I go outside

I stand there

looking up at the sky

praying I could talk to you

 

I feel the ice cold rain drops

hit my face

I hear the storm sirens

I don't care

 

I see the twister

I walk closer

I feel two hands

pull my back

 

I turn my head

and I see you there

You told me to get back inside

I told you no that I didn't want to

 

You picked me up

and took me in

you put me down

and I stand there and stare

 

I start to shiver

you hand me your jacket

I put it on

and you smile at me

 

I say why are you doing this?

and you tell me

you always loved me

and then we slowy kiss

 

We just stand there

and let everyone watch

We don't care

because we're in love

Reviews

[hardscoper6]

I like the feel of this poem. It takes you emotions and almost plays with them. You made me feel sadness at the start and then it ends happily. Always a pleasure to read your stuff Kymberley! Keep it up!

[SouthernBelle]

thank you

[Jordan's Back]

You picked me up
and took me in
you put me down
and I stand there and stare

Truly one of the most innocent displays of Romance I ever seen penned. Well done!

[SouthernBelle]

thanks

[Jordan's Back]

no thank you, its Refreshing to see pure unadulterated Romance, and so Wonderful to read :)

[SouthernBelle]

aww well thank you for the nice review

[SmileBig :)]

Aww I like this. It's sweet and I can most definitely relate

[SouthernBelle]

thank you so much