All the pretty words

All the pretty words are spoken

day in and day out

All the pretty words are spoken

where do they all come from?

i will love you to the end of my days

and i hope that you and i will never split ways

i may be young but you still love me

and i want you to know i will always be you baby

All the pretty words are spoken

making some fall for bad tricks

all the pretty words are spoken

for many, it is their fix

by your side i will always stand

i promise i will never leave you 

you are my rock and shield 

to your love i will always yield

All the pretty words are spoken

by couples everyday

All the pretty words are spoken 

by lovers who will stray

in your arms i will hide from every fear

i will tell you everything my one and only, my dear

i love you babe thats all there is to it

in your hand i place my heart, please dont misuse it

Author's Note

i think i messed up a few of the rymes but i got bored during science and just wrote so... please rate and review

Reviews

[Ferg]

this is not bad for being whipped out during science class (which you should have been listening to, she said in her "worst mother ever" stern voice :)
you definitely have a flair for writing poetry. i can tell that you will certainly grow into it even more strongly as you get some more "life" behind you (you know, when you get "old" like me:)
But is was well written, nonetheless.

[Ethan Paz]

Good write. You write alot in science class. ABAB gotta know that. Your poetry reflects your love for that dude. Keep on writing, use your talent to make the world shine.

[Dillon Cotter]

Well said and done!

-Will

[X]

eargasm, dudette! supreme awsomeness (even though i am not into love poems) this is a first, i say 3 thums up..... lol 3

[Rachael]

Second stanza, last line.. Your* baby, I think that's what you meant.
Your rhymes are pretty good, I don't see anything really wrong.
But to the overall poem, I love it!
It's cute, and shows you are committed, yet still holding back in case you get hurt (or at least that's my interpretation)
I can also see this as a song, as I do many poems. The repetition of "All the pretty words" adds a nice flow.

[deeps]

This is wonderful and so full of emotion.
I like what you have written here, full of heart and soul.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I liked this one. It is a really great read for me.

[Dani shedd Lottermoser]

I think that you did pretty for writing it on the fly like that.