Liminal Faces

Liminal Faces

A Poem by L4rn13
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Vividity as such compliments snow-filled winter gateways...

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Waterfalls so crushing and vast like the lucid blue daydream of nights once past
Stereotypical monuments of the ice-bleached sky reveals no obnoxtious sentiment just benevolence and wonder
Vividity as such compliments snow-filled winter gateways and bestow an archaic, resplendent world only the naked soul can upon these ruined eyes
Partake such a celestial dance and expose the ocean as the real world bellows this return again

© 2014 L4rn13



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You have such a way with words. You know how to use the right words without making them sound forced. Amazed!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Lots of imagery going here. I'd say structure it better; otherwise it's awesome.

Posted 3 Years Ago


L4rn13

3 Years Ago

I wrote it out like that on purpose as part of the message. Maybe its too much.
Lot of work going on in this piece and enjoyed the end with great message, great write my friend

Posted 3 Years Ago


L4rn13

3 Years Ago

I think I may have used too much.

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Added on March 26, 2014
Last Updated on March 26, 2014
Tags: liminal, place, facial, windows, faces, eyes, ice, blue, drowning, world

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L4rn13
L4rn13

Birmingham, United Kingdom



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