Feel Me

I sense and feel

a presence on the page

my font vibrates

with the touch

of those eyes

 

lines and spaces

tingle

 echo hollowness

and once again

I lay naked and exposed to you

open and willing

to be taken inch by inch

slowly and languorously

 

splay innermost folds

of my mind

tease with fingers deft

and plunge 

 slick depth

to my hardened core

 

fill me with your need

and I'll give to you my own

 

my longing is for your words

 

whilst others seek

to decorate with diamonds

drench me in pearls

of your heart's pen

 

let the words

roll off your captive tongue

and free your spirit

to feel me

touch me

know me

 

my release

shall be pleasure doubled

when shared

betwixt two

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[FJ Davis]

Most readers don't seem to realize how extremely intelligent you are. I've noticed because I consider high intelligence to be a threat to my existence.
Why, you ask? Couldn't a very smart individual be a valuable friend?
Unfortunately, such persons are, invariably, far too perceptive to socialize with the likes of me. Hence, my perceived possible contention.
Will now try to impress you with the quality of my intellect: This piece has everything to do with a deep and abiding love for words, and little--if anything--to do with an arousing description of the sex act.
How come I now feel more like a big liar than a big brain?

[LA Lorena]

you need not try to impress me with your intellect. it is quite apparent. You have no fear for your existence, or for our friendship. I loves ya, and your stuck with me now.

[LA Lorena]

you feel that way frank, because you know the poetess well enough to not just comment on what she writes, but to actually contemplate whether she had her tongue in cheek or sticking out when she writes a particular piece. You know if you could see her eyes, you would have a better inkling if she is serious, joking, probing or teasing.

[C.R.Turner]

Whew! This is about Christmas shopping, right? Only a few days left now you know.

[LA Lorena]

yes CR, it's about shopping. your insight never fails to amaze me. ;)

[quinfinn]

wow...i love this write. it is appealing and sensually charged without becoming offensive. it reveals the beautiful side of wanton desire and fuels the senses. i actually found it quite arousing. magnificent!

[LA Lorena]

Thanks Quin. I do try to not step over the line and appear offensive. Glad you enjoyed it.

[Distant horizons]

Uhm, just remembered. Need to go turn down the heating and take a cold shower :-)

[LA Lorena]

LOL. Behave Lorry! ;) thanks for dropping in!

[Distant horizons]

:-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

WOWZA... A tantalizing read... you know reading someone's words is like looking into their soul so it is easy to get caught up in them.

[LA Lorena]

thanks Dale. Glad you found it a worthwhile read.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are welcome :)

[Frieda P]

Such a revealing piece of work, it luxuriates in exposing the soul, nicely penned. One of my favorites of your's, there's a lot of moxy and truth in those words. Bravo.

[LA Lorena]

glad you enjoyed it Frieda. After I wrote this, as I was driving to work in my car, I became very dissatified with it, and could not wait to get to the office to edit. I hope you still find it to be so.

[Frieda P]

Well, you took something nearly perfect, and made it perfecter!! Kudos Ms LA ;-)