Who Are You

A response to Blake's Who You Are.

www.writerscafe.org/writing/blakel79/237221/

 

Who Are You

 

We are all but who we are

At this very moment

No longer who we were

Yet to be who we will become

Does anyone really know the who

Do you

Not me too

Reviews

[Robert Luna]

I am me
you are you
I am you
you are I
together we are complete
and unable to relate
for we never know
who is I

I liked this piece as it caused me to stop ad think I always love to be left to ponder about things after i read them.


Great Job!!!!!!

[E. M. Murren]

I like this a lot. It has a different feel to Blake's work, but that might just be my reading of them. The rhyme and rhythm flow so easily from your pen. The message is powerfully expressed. Well done.

[THE BLACK SEAL]

lol reminds me of the who and their song who are you. i was listening to it on my mp3 player a while ago so sue me...lol good write

[Tally]

Nice short poem. The phrase 'never judge a book by its cover' comes to mind when I read it. 'No longer who we were' reflects our inability to chande what is past.

[BlakeL79]

Quite a summation of the now. I see this as living in the moment. It is also has a very questioning quality.

Thank you for sharing.

[The Elder Pine]

I really like it. The opening half was awesome, so many great lines and thoughts. The end (last two lines) were a little less strong and might do with a change but that is up to you. I think you have crafted a very thought prevoking poem, well done.