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Dingle Dangle Road

Dingle Dangle Road

A Poem by Lucinda Bogart

I dingle dangled down

The dingle dangle road

Thought out loud to myself

Where did the time go

I looked under and over

Round and round

Stepped and checked

And stumbled and frowned

There I found myself

In the middle of dingle dine

Wandering out loud to myself

Will I ever find what’s mine

Mysteries being what they are

Somewhat out of reach

I turned myself back over

And went right back to sleep

 

© 2008 Lucinda Bogart


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I really love the way you write and capture such a raw energy among your words. You tell a tale so vividly that anyone that reads your words is able to see them and feel them other than just read them. They do not remain just laying upon a page they take a life of their own. It is always a pleasure to read your words.


Well Done!!!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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This is so charming... yet rich with meaning at the same time. Such a wonderful work. Many Cheers.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lol you know you remind me for some reason of my favorite singer. sandy denny

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

What a jumping jolly good read! Great job! Tons of dingle dangle fun!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I really love the way you write and capture such a raw energy among your words. You tell a tale so vividly that anyone that reads your words is able to see them and feel them other than just read them. They do not remain just laying upon a page they take a life of their own. It is always a pleasure to read your words.


Well Done!!!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


I can't help thinking that you have sort of an older voice, possibly a feel of a different age. The poem may be "cute" but I think it has volumes to offer beyond simply that. Thank you for sharing another very nice piece with me.


Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

I always did like this piece of yours. Very cutely written. And of course the ending, when you're just tired of trying to find something you thought you were looking for. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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Lucinda Bogart
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