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Wake Not My Sleeping Child


A Poem by Lucinda Bogart

 

Frothy air
Swan struck loveliness
Float feather light
Into my dreams
 
Whisper soft
Misty shroud
Supplant my darkness
If only for a little while
 
Before Dawn breaks
Night
Visit me
Touch me
 
But wake not
My sleeping Child
Rose lipped
Breath upon my neck
 
Touch me now
Touch my soul
Undo my sorrow
Make me whole

© 2008 Lucinda Bogart
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Author's Note
Not sure if this one is quite where it needs to be. Comments welcome....
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There's something unique about this one and I can't quite put my finger on it. It's not that I don't like it because I do, it's just unlike what I usually read. It reminds me of this chantesque thing my mother taught me to say when I couldn't fall asleep. I think you should keep it just as it is.
Nice work,

Brette

Posted 2 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.





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