REGRET

REGRET

A Poem by Holi Hudson
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A POEM I HAD TO WRITE FOR CLASS ABOUT EITHER A MEMORABLE SILENCE, OR A PERSON. I DID BOTH. IT'S ABOUT MY GRANDPA.

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I should have taken your hand,
When mom
Placed it in mine.
  
I should have,
At least,
Touched you,

One
     Last
             Time 


I should have 
Stopped them
When they went at it,
Yet again

I should have told them
Fighting
Wasn’t how you’d want to
Remember them.

I should have cried
When I needed to,
Instead, 
I held back.

I should have,
I should have.
Now, I regret that.

© 2009 Holi Hudson


Author's Note

Holi Hudson
THIS IS FROM LIKE, A YEAR AGO.

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So touching and sad
I wish i could have been there for my grandpa
I miss him alot. This is very well written and expressed

Posted 14 Years Ago


I almost cried, because it is so true.

I will always regret not being there for you when your grandpa died. I know it's not an excuse, but I never really knew my grandfather except the stories my mom tells me about him once a year at most and the one time we visited him. I never knew just how close you were to your grandpa and I carry that guilt with me into my other friendships, too.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very well written. I love it! Great job!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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