Beatback Cover

Beatback Cover

A Poem by Lola Nation
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To be published in www.zoygoteinmycoffee.com - Jan 25, 2010 Issue #130 Also in Winter Quarterly of http://fragilearts.tumblr.com/

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Can’t pick up the phone today
I see,

clearly
the ungrateful display,
like cheap artwork
at a church bizarre...

Last week-


you were happy to have
your fingers knuckle deep
dragging in my honey

I get you


you’re just a creep
back into my life,
sideswipe,
leave me
be
type.

 

© 2009 Lola Nation


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Intense! I dig it. You have such a knack for details and phrasing. So clearly I'm breaking my habits and actually heaping praise on another human being. This is rare, and earned.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hey, his chromosomes think he's doing just fine. Wait until you hear what they have to say next week.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It might just be me but I'm kinda confused with the very ending... Is the poem for typing? It just isn't very clear.

Posted 14 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Lola Nation
Lola Nation

Los Angeles, CA



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Please find my work on these two sites. For poetry: http://insult-to-injury-poetry.blogspot.com/. For short stories: http://make-it-short.blogspot.com/ ABOUT ME: I am originally from Venice Be.. more..

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A Poem by Lola Nation