My Invisible Hero

My Invisible Hero

A Poem by Lady Cardinal

I am not superhuman

I can’t fight for myself

Therefore, I depend on you to fight for me

 

Fight for my freedom

Fight for my love

Fight for my life

And in return,

I will not thank you

 

I will never know who you are

I will never see your face

I will never know your name

But every time I take a breath

I expect you to fight for me

 

Fight for my soul

Fight for my death

Fight for my sins

And in return,

I will never be grateful

 

I will not cry if you die

I will not laugh when you are happy

I will not scream when you are in pain

But I expect you to do so for me

Because my life is more valuable than yours

 

So do your job hero

Die fighting for me

 

And in return,

 

I will live my life without caring about you

 

© 2011 Lady Cardinal


Author's Note

Lady Cardinal
I wrote this for a literature class in high school. It's about our soldiers

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This is very powerful, very original and very well composed. I love poetic device and you have harnessed the power of anaphora to stir emotion in your reader. You made me not like you and that is the mark of a great poet. It's sad but I'm afraid many people feel this way about our soldiers. Standing ovations for a piece well done.

Love,
Amera

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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the truth in this is really challenging. it makes you think about the people who make your life possible. the people who pay for you freedom. great write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is very powerful, very original and very well composed. I love poetic device and you have harnessed the power of anaphora to stir emotion in your reader. You made me not like you and that is the mark of a great poet. It's sad but I'm afraid many people feel this way about our soldiers. Standing ovations for a piece well done.

Love,
Amera

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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