Rainbow Pencil

This is a very old piece but I like it. It's just a bit of fun ;-)

Pencil on paper
Let sweet words flow
Over a rainbow
To create a pot of gold

Reviews

[Spilled Her Guts in Cur..]

oh this was cute! i loved the use ofcolour and a refreshing simplicity to it.

[J]

Ah, so true. Yes, it's magical and fleeting, isn't it? I think so, definitely.

Nice and concise thoughts here. Made me nod my head, yup =)
J

[Dezaraye]

I like it, too! :) I love the way you used the rainbow colors, it adds such a great effect to the piece. It reminds me of simple and beautiful places and times. Thank you for sharing this.

[Leah Maldonado]

I really liked how it was colorful....and after readin it twice I found that its about writing something good that you;re proud of....people write millions and millions of stanzas trying to describe the greatness of poetry but I think you've sumed it up right in this little piece.
nice work
Leah

[R J Askew]

I was drawn to this cos I like pencils...but my favourites are those black and red stipped ones. (Barcelona colours). I got a bit crazy about writing with pencils I found in the street, viewing them as lucky pencils full of words, sort of rescue pencils. And if they were a bit beaten up, sort of half used with teeth marks on them, then that would be doubly lucky pencil. But since the SUPER TUESDAY meltdown I've started using a cheap ink pen cos pencil on paper can be horrible to try and read months later! I like the idea of the pencil pot of gold...but I can't imagine writing a poem in rainbow pencils. But on the other hand why not? A poem written in differnt colours might actually provoke different thoughts. So why not? Young kids would find NOTHING odd about writing a poem in different colours. Also a boring HB office pencil could dream of being a coloured pencil...of drawing kids pictures rather than totting up grey figures in columns.

[JC Fox]

Oooh its colorful I like it too

[stork]

Hello Lauren,

This is a delightful verse and your use of colors make a it a pleasure to read.


Thank you for a lovely read.


stork