Invisible

Invisible

A Poem by Violet's Run
"

life in todays social media

"

 

 

Am I invisible?

 

Does no one see me dissolving into

gross insanity?

 

Losing myself to the crimson tide of life

 

aware that I am being consumed by society

and

 our plastic man made government

 

Slipping through all the cracks

 

and

avoiding social media is a crime

 

for

which I have been sentenced

to being

 

invisible

© 2014 Violet's Run


Author's Note

Violet's Run
be kind

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heart wrenching plea for acknowledgement .. so many slip thru .. too many go unnoticed .. my thought is that it is not only governments but plastic lots of things ... these lines especially hit home for me:
"and
avoiding social media is a crime"

a lot left unsaid .. lots between the lines .. i think you should expand on this one .. if inspired of course ;)
E.



for

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on September 4, 2014
Last Updated on September 4, 2014
Tags: invisible, screaming, help, lies, anger, betrayal, spying, gossip, friends, jerks, government, paranoia

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Violet's Run
Violet's Run

san joaquin valley, CA



About
My grandmother was Violet. I share her name I am Susan Violet.. But she was the strongest most beautiful woman I have met. For some reason when I started writing again I had this image of her telling .. more..

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