Divided By You

Do you still love me, without me you're blue?
Have you forgotten, and found someone new?
Are you still waiting, for me to come back?
Have you moved on now, gone forth on your track?

Are you my future, or are you my past?
Could we still make it, or wouldn't we last?
Are you still with me, have I lost you for good?
Would you still choose me, would you run, if you could?

I wish you'd tell me, whatever you feel
I have to know, if my hope is still real
Would you please answer, I need you to say
If now or ever, with you I will stay

Alas, I feel it's undoubtedly true
I am forever divided by you

Reviews

[Gee]

A very enjoyable read,flowed beautifully.Nicely done

[Lady Lola]

Thank you for your lovely comment! Glad you enjoyed my poem. :-)

[silentLIGHT]

Heavy stuff. I'm sure a lot of people can relate with this. I know I do.

I like the cadance in your poem, it makes it incredibly attractive to keep reading.

[Lady Lola]

It might be too heavy a poem for some, but I think you should embrace your emotions; even if they are painful. I tried to show how ambiguous a loss can be. Happy to have intrigued you! :)

[Ellay]

Such a beautiful poem. Loved it :)

[Lady Lola]

Glad you like it!