Preface

This is the Preface of my new book Ladette to Lady. Hope you like it :)

Preface 

The bells rang as the wedding guests started to go in. Isabelle stood outside deliberating weather she should attend. She loved him more than he would ever know, but it wasn't right. 

Months ago she would of gone in there like a storm blazing, stopping the wedding, but with all she'd learned in the last six months...she couldn't do it...not to the one she loved.

Author's Note

Sorry if there is anything wrong with spelling or anything else I'm dyslexic. Hope you liked it :)

Reviews

[CW Johnson]

Interesting. It left me wanting to know more. My only suggestion would be to eliminate unnecessary words but only in the one sentence:

Months ago she would have stormed in blazing, stopping the wedding, but with all she'd learned in the last six months...she couldn't do it...not to the one she loved.

[Alicka]

Very brief, but it caught your attention fast. I would like to read more it just got me curious of where you are going with your story.

[Arya_the_elven_lady]

Okay nice intro.

[Rory CJ Frankson]

It seems to be a good beginning... brief but owns enough to create some questions [but with all she'd learned in the last six months] enough to attract the reader to at least find out what she had learned in the last six months.

I look forward to your starting chapters Laura. Good start.