the moons child

Celestial beams of pale red light
casting off the lapping bay waters
brings true beauty to this dark night
in rolling waves hides the moons daughter
small though she may be
her true beauty i still see.

Reviews

[Erica Daubert]

i love the simplicity of this piece. its strong and very good imagery. it left an impression. this is a piece of art.

[Jenny DelVecchio]

so few words that can leave such a lasting impression!! Amazing!

[Joe]

This is a really good poem. Great imagery and rhythm really give it a nice flow. Great job! Keep it up!