Slow Motion Love

I want to love you in slow motion
So the world feels our emotion

A love the whole world can see
Frozen in time, just you and me

With a kiss that lasts for days
Witnessed a thousand different ways

Where every second is used
And time itself is confused

'Til eternity gets a new name
Our slow motion love, the blame

I want to love you in slow motion
A frame by frame devotion

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

Now that's a kind of love any gal in her right mind could live with!! Bring on that slow motion love.........lol

[Whiskurz]

Thank you Sheila.....Whisk

[Austin.Stoesz]

I really liked the simplicity behind the structure, and how you conveyed a powerful message through a little amount of words. Very good word choice. This is definitely a well written poem that sparks many feelings of love, and allows the reader to feel how you do. I like it.

[Whiskurz]

Thank you my friend......Whisk

[Sami Khalil]

This could be turned into a song nice music.
Well penned.

[Whiskurz]

Thanks Sami......Whisk

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.

[Distant horizons]

A wonderful expression of how love can change the world and the way we view it.

[Whiskurz]

Thank you my friend......Whisk

[Distant horizons]

No worries

[Jack...]

A beautiful and affectionate love poem. Short, sweet and to the point.

[Whiskurz]

Thanks again Jack......Whisk