The Other Stuff

The Other Stuff

A Poem by Whiskurz

I wanted to buy a dozen red roses
But they refused to touch your hand
The chocolates said that, "You're much sweeter"
And, "Your lips would make them bland"

So I tried to find just the right card
But the words just ran away
There was nothing that the cards could do
There was nothing the words could say

I wanted to cook a Valentine's feast
But I fear it's just a waste
Your smile has crippled my need for food
My appetite's been erased

Then I tried to buy a diamond ring
But your beauty stole its shine
For it's never seen a love like ours
One like yours and mine

So I just want to say, "I love you"
And forget the other stuff
So Happy Valentines Day sweet darling
And I hope that that's enough

© 2013 Whiskurz


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Heartfelt and very sweet! I know I would rather have a poem than chocolates, diamonds or whatever! Love the gentle flow to this piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Awww....this is sooo sweet....loved it :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Love this Whisk- so romantic!! Best...

Posted 11 Years Ago


I think you have a natural talent.The way it is worded makes it flow well


Posted 11 Years Ago


Aww, this is sweet!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Whiskurz

11 Years Ago

Thanks again my friend......Whisk
How cute!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Whiskurz

11 Years Ago

Thank you my friend......Whisk
Calibaster

11 Years Ago

you're welcome!
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LJW
It's enough. Trust me.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Whiskurz

11 Years Ago

Thank you my friend......Whisk
wow
that is just enough, lucky she ;)
I love the sweet romantic poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Whiskurz

11 Years Ago

Thanks Dalia.....Whisk
You ol' romantic softie you! Whisk this was adorable beyond measure, you r lady love is sure to be pleased :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Whiskurz

11 Years Ago

Thanks Corset.......Whisk
This is so beautiful. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Whiskurz

11 Years Ago

Thank you my friend......Whisk

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Added on February 12, 2013
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