Dance of Emotions

Dance of Emotions

A Poem by Whiskurz

Sorrow only hangs her head
While walking to the floor
Pride wants all the attention
While Greed keeps seeking more
Shame hides behind the curtains
While Anger demands his way
Fear is too afraid to dance
Impatience just wouldn't stay
Joy was dancing all over the place
While Lust's heart began to burn
Love just watched with stars in her eyes
While Patience was waiting his turn
Confusion didn't know what to do
While Surprise was doing the twist
Shock was so appalled of it all
While Temptation just couldn't resist
The Broken Hearts just sit and cried
While Doubt didn't believe it was real
Now you've seen the dance of emotions
So tell me, how do you feel?

© 2012 Whiskurz


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That's really awesome! I love how you combined it all the ideas into the frame of a dance! Very cleverly executed! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


lol Very creative dance !

Posted 11 Years Ago


this is the Who's on first of Emotions, it is both true and fun, loved it

Posted 11 Years Ago


So wonderful. The simplicity of this is exquisite. Made me smile in it's wisdom.

Posted 11 Years Ago


OMG I love this! So creative, I just loved all that characterization with different emotions, brought together just beautifully. I really enjoyed reading this. The rhyme scheme made it very catchy, and the emotions were elicited in such a lovely way, all in a dance, different characters all co-existing inside an individual. Loved the harmony, loved the poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


AMAZING! I love love this poem a lot, this has got to be one of the best pieces of writing on the site!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Truly, this was a dance, as it is, within our minds, at some moments. This is a very clever study of feelings you have done here, my friend. Very unique.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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a wise ride on the roller coaster of emotions, you speak from a deeper voice. The final question seems like a dare to get on this this tragic wheel. Well done!! Linda Willows

Posted 11 Years Ago



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