A Love Story

The stars reflect her beauty
While competing for her smile
Each one thinks her love is theirs
While filled with blind denial

She continues to entice them
As each one feels her stare
Her love belongs to all of them
But none will choose to share

A falling star is nothing more
Than a star with a broken heart
Crippled by her rejection
It will suddenly fall apart

Whenever you see a twinkling star
It's just the Lover's dance
Vying for her attention
In its quest to find romance

The Dippers, both big and small
Were formed to quench her thirst
They stand in line to honor her
As they battle to be the first

The Northern Star takes precedence
As he points which way to go
His countenance is blinding
As he absorbs her radiant glow

So, don't forget to watch the stars
And smile each time they swoon
For now you know this love story
Between the stars and moon

Reviews

[Mason]

I was really caught up in this piece. The flow was effortless to read and the story was building with each line. So nice.

[Southern Cross]

Really enjoyed this as you can see the name I write with is Southern Cross..Love the imagery and the flow of this

[Sandy Beach]

Great piece Whiskurz - a love story that goes on and on, with all the glory of the heavens as its witness.

[Mama Topaz]

This is really wonderful... it makes me smile. It's going into my library!

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Oh this is great. Every line reflects such beauty :)
Keep up the great work, you're an amazing writer I hope you do realize that.



Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)